Talk:Slug Girls
From Felarya
--Karbo Ah yes it works a lot better I think, it's more natural ^^
"They are also known to have an extremely developed sense of smell, which provides them with temporal and tri-dimensional information." This sounds a little too... complex in my opinion, like something out of a university math textbook. I would like to suggest explaining this a little further, maybe by giving an example or two.
Something like: "They are also known to have an extremely developed sense of smell. With a sniff they can determine roughly how long ago a creature passed by, and what path it took through the area." --Oldman40k2003 06:41, 27 October 2012 (PDT)