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--[[User:karbo|Karbo]]
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Mhh for this one I would rather keep the original sentence. Escaping from a stomach is still a very rare occurrence I think.
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Suggested edit: adding a sentence following "Thus, any adventurer who ventures carelessly into the jungle will most likely end their trek slowly digesting in a stomach." that says something like "But, on the upside, skilled, extremely well prepared, and lucky adventurers may be able to escape from a stomach, and have a second chance at beating or running away from their predator."
 
Suggested edit: adding a sentence following "Thus, any adventurer who ventures carelessly into the jungle will most likely end their trek slowly digesting in a stomach." that says something like "But, on the upside, skilled, extremely well prepared, and lucky adventurers may be able to escape from a stomach, and have a second chance at beating or running away from their predator."
  
 
I suggest a change like this because, in a few extremely rare cases, this has happened in some stories.  Although now that I think about it the one instance that I really remember (the sluggirl who escaped Katrika (Vunni maybe?)) wasn't an adventurer.--[[User:Oldman40k2003|Oldman40k2003]] 01:06, 2 November 2012 (PDT)
 
I suggest a change like this because, in a few extremely rare cases, this has happened in some stories.  Although now that I think about it the one instance that I really remember (the sluggirl who escaped Katrika (Vunni maybe?)) wasn't an adventurer.--[[User:Oldman40k2003|Oldman40k2003]] 01:06, 2 November 2012 (PDT)
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:Indeed Vuni isn't an adventurer... and her survival was due to sheer dumb luck. ;) [[User:French-snack|French-snack]] 05:25, 3 November 2012 (PDT)

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--Karbo Mhh for this one I would rather keep the original sentence. Escaping from a stomach is still a very rare occurrence I think.

Suggested edit: adding a sentence following "Thus, any adventurer who ventures carelessly into the jungle will most likely end their trek slowly digesting in a stomach." that says something like "But, on the upside, skilled, extremely well prepared, and lucky adventurers may be able to escape from a stomach, and have a second chance at beating or running away from their predator."

I suggest a change like this because, in a few extremely rare cases, this has happened in some stories. Although now that I think about it the one instance that I really remember (the sluggirl who escaped Katrika (Vunni maybe?)) wasn't an adventurer.--Oldman40k2003 01:06, 2 November 2012 (PDT)

Indeed Vuni isn't an adventurer... and her survival was due to sheer dumb luck. ;) French-snack 05:25, 3 November 2012 (PDT)