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| − | Hmmmmm, it's probably best "fixed" (it's not that "broken", it just sounds a little strange when reading it) by rewriting it into two separate sentences, but let me think about it... maybe: "They rarely mix with other races, considering them to be inferior, and in turn they are considered haughty and disdainful." | + | Hmmmmm, it's probably best "fixed" (it's not that "broken", it just sounds a little strange when reading it) by rewriting it into two separate sentences, but let me think about it... maybe: "They rarely mix with other races, considering them to be inferior, and in turn they are considered haughty and disdainful."--[[User:Oldman40k2003|Oldman40k2003]] 18:46, 17 August 2007 (PDT) |
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| + | Karbo : Oh yes that works a lot better this way. Thank you ^_^ | ||
Latest revision as of 01:30, 18 August 2007
Karbo :
<<< They rarely mix with other races though and are often seen as haunty and disdainful toward them, whom they consider as inferior.
I think this sentence is wrong but I don't know how to correct it ^^ ;
Hmmmmm, it's probably best "fixed" (it's not that "broken", it just sounds a little strange when reading it) by rewriting it into two separate sentences, but let me think about it... maybe: "They rarely mix with other races, considering them to be inferior, and in turn they are considered haughty and disdainful."--Oldman40k2003 18:46, 17 August 2007 (PDT)
Karbo : Oh yes that works a lot better this way. Thank you ^_^
