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You changed "Felarya is a strange, immense, and unstable jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions." back to "Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions, which make it dimensionally unstable." and did not comment your change, so I don't know why the change was rejected. | You changed "Felarya is a strange, immense, and unstable jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions." back to "Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions, which make it dimensionally unstable." and did not comment your change, so I don't know why the change was rejected. | ||
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| + | Ah sorry about that ! I commented on the forum and forgot to say it here ^^; Yes I changed back because I think it made it easier to understand that the world is unstable *because* it's situated at a crossroad between dimensions. But I understand your point. in this case, removing "dimensionally" would make it, right ? | ||
Latest revision as of 16:49, 17 November 2009
Karbo : I have seen a Wiki where there was a banner in top of the front page ( not just a picture put in the text )
Do you know how to do it ? it would looks great I think ^^
You changed "Felarya is a strange, immense, and unstable jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions." back to "Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions, which make it dimensionally unstable." and did not comment your change, so I don't know why the change was rejected.
I originally changed it because a forum member pointed out to me that having "dimension" in there twice, and right next to itself to boot, sounds funny (which it does). My rewording was an attempt to remove the duplication by moving the adjective "unstable" to the list of other adjectives.
Other possible fixes would be the splitting of that singular sentence into two sentences at the comma, IE: "Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions. This makes it dimensionally unstable."
Another possible fix would be to replace "dimensions" with "universes" or "realities", thus "hiding" the duplication.
--Oldman40k2003 08:04, 17 November 2009 (PST)
Ah sorry about that ! I commented on the forum and forgot to say it here ^^; Yes I changed back because I think it made it easier to understand that the world is unstable *because* it's situated at a crossroad between dimensions. But I understand your point. in this case, removing "dimensionally" would make it, right ?
